Monday, December 21, 2009

HW 31 - Exploring Methods of Aggrandizing the Self

Part A
I asked my friend P.J. about some of the aspects of how he dresses and how he acts because he lives on long island and it is a completely different culture out there. Different accents, different lifestyles, etc.
Whether he is wearing a sweatshirt, t-shirt, or a jacket it always about his high school varsity football team. This along with jeans, and some sort of running shoes. When asked about this he replies with, well i like it, its pretty cool to be on the varsity football team and i am only a sophomore, so i want people to know. The shoes are for comfort and the jeans is because he likes them but also because everyone else out there wears them.
I don't really see anything too special about this, if i were to dig i would come up with that he does it to be someone because no one wants to feel insignificant but that would have to mix in with comfort and just tradition. These wouldn't be new ideas. The real new ideas would be that these people all do this to feel different from one another but really they just want to be the same as each other because creativity isn't something that is taught, nor is individuality. They play team sports and because of that they learn to operate as a community so they are proud to be a part of this community. We pride ourselves on being individuals and they are all about being similar. It varies on the community. Not a huge discovery, but i think it means something to know that we aren't all the same, maybe you can predict what people will say based on what they live, but in a city like New York, you can't think everyone here is the same because there are people here from all over the world, so they all think different things that could all be rooted back to independent family/community/anti-community values. Whatever the reason is, i refuse to accept that we are all the same

Part B:
Who i am, and who i am to you are completely different people. I am not saying i have multiple personality disorder or anything to that effect but what i am saying is that i am never the same person for everyone. I can be nice, mean, condescending, quite, loud, smart, dumb. It all depends on the situation and who i am with because, honestly, i don't know who i am. I have had fights with people who are very important to me because they say i am two different people, and i know. I know that i am not the same person day to day and it eats me alive. I dress how i have always dressed but i started wearing brighter clothes and Nikes because i think that it would make me stand out more. I don't know if that is the really completely honest reason behind it because i don't know what i would say to answer that question in 20 minutes. I can feel that deep down inside me there is a person who really knows who he is and what he does, he is aware of his actions and what they do to people. He doesn't want to hurt people, he likes to see them smile because their smiles really are beautiful. Laughs are better then music to him. Being an ear to talk to and a shoulder to lean on are second nature to him. Does this make him human? Of course, whether or not he talks back, he is still aware and he still thinks about the things he does. He still feels it when someone hurts him. But the pain never seems to linger long because they don't really mean it. One day that person will show his face. Its hard to be that person because people don't really know what to do with someone who is like that. He is not the same person they knew. I hate this, i really do, i hate it that i can't always be who i want to be, it drives away the people who are closest to me. They are the ones who count and they are the ones who deserve to be treated right because deep down they know that this person is there too. He is known to make an appearance at the right times, but he doesn't stay long. Life is a hard thing to embrace because, well who knows when it is going to let you down. That isn't what is important though, what is important is that i recognize who i am. People are collages of the people around them. They are made of the good and the bad, because not everyone will look favorably upon every trait that they have, no matter how many times people may say that they don't live for other people, they know that they are willing to change for the people who they care about, and they think care about them back. I know that i would be willing to change for my good friends if they wanted me too. But i don't always know if i can. I don't know if i can be able to do something like that, i don't know if i can just change like that. I wish i could. I don't know how much writing about it here for everyone to see will help me here. Maybe it is just another one of my personalities who is doing this to me. But that doesn't matter right now. I don't really know how much does matter. What i do know for certain is that no matter who i am at the moment, what personality may be present, what reflection of society and the people around me i may giving off, i am still some version of myself, I have still taken that and made it my own. I would like to think that is more then i can say for other people, but i am in no position to say that, i just want to be able to recognize that i at least can understand this about myself. Just a thought

Thursday, December 17, 2009

HW 30 - Psychological and Philosophical Theorizing of Cool

You aren’t important. Your ideas aren’t important, your actions aren’t important, your existence isn’t important. At least not to me… Dependence on another human is painful. It is hard to live when you are constantly looking for approval or attention. Everyone knows this because everyone has been hurt at one time or another by a person, yet no one does anything about it because maybe one day we can get lucky enough to find someone who values the same thing as us. Is that all life is, looking for someone else? We live for a cure to loneliness. Democritus said that “Happiness resides not in possessions, and not in gold, happiness dwells in the soul.” What does it take to be happy? Can someone be happy and lonely? Happiness comes from having what you want, whether that is emotionally or physically. “Nothing is impossible as long as you try.”(My Mother).

Is my life empty because I don’t go out and get drunk every night? Your words are meaningless, your actions are meaningless, because you don’t fit in, you aren’t important. You aren’t important to me, what have you done to make my life any better then it is now? You came here and fucked up everything that I had going already. I could have been anyone and everyone, but now I am no one but someone. “Nothing is easier than self-deceit. For what each man wishes, that he also believes to be true.” (Demosthenes). I am what I am, and you, and the guy behind you. I am all of them because, well, I don’t know who I am, that’s what makes me who I am. Rene Descartes once said, “I think therefore I am.” What does thinking do for us? I am no matter what stupid idea pops into my head, I will still exist no matter what conversation I may be having with myself. Descartes also said, “Except our own thoughts, there is nothing absolutely in our power.” I can think what I want about anything and the only thing you can do it tell me I am wrong, my imagination is more powerful then anything you can throw at me. These men are famous for their thoughts, not the actions or effects of their thoughts. They preached their ideas, they didn’t force people to listen, they did because they believed in what they said and looked to them for hope. They didn’t depend on these people, but had faith in them.

It was 9:30, absurdly early to be up on a Saturday morning, but he needed to meet someone. He quickly took a shower and got dressed, was about to walk out the door when he checked his phone, one new text message, it said, “hey sorry, I really can’t hang out today, I got a concussion and missed 2 days of school this week and I have SOOO much work to make up, sorry, we can hang out another time.” He wasn’t really shocked, he had known her since he was 3 months old and had a small feeling that she was busy, but he still had faith that she would come through. For that reason, he didn’t make other plans, so it was 9:30 on a Saturday morning, fully dressed and showered with nothing to do, where do you go from there? Back to bed? He was already up. Watch television all day? Might as well, all of his other friends were busy, oh well, its just one day, he thought.

That one moment of realizing that there is nothing to do and you really are alone, that is how emptiness feels. No matter how fast you recover, that little moment will stick with you for a long time. There are hundreds of ways to get rid of this terrible feeling but not one of them comes without taking a chance. With risk comes reward, but sometimes you have to question, is it really worth it? John Dryden says “Only man clogs his happiness with care, destroying what is, with thoughts of what may be.” When you begin to question what happiness really is then you begin to question if you really can be happy and then it all goes to hell in a hand basket.

All this is true to me, whether or not you agree is beyond me but I do want to leave you with some words by Mr. Ralph Waldo Emerson

To believe your own thought, to believe that what is true for you in your private heart is true for all men,

—that is genius.

Sunday, December 13, 2009

HW 29 - Merchants of Cool

Money is the force behind a great many actions. It is what makes people do stupid things like sit in a cubicle 8 hours a day, 6 days a week. It is what pushes us to want more and do more, because if the money is right we will do just about anything. But this isn't new information. Nothing i am going to write here is new information, just something for you to consider. Self awareness is they type of thing that does make us think about it, not necessarily change right away. If someone calls you out on something you did wrong, like hey, i don't like how you always make fun of my mom or something, will they stop right away? Probably not, but they will start to think about it before they do it the next times. Its like planting the seed of doubt in someones mind. Its not always necessary to culture it yourself, you just need to plant it and their own mind takes care of the rest.
I really enjoyed the class with Matt Fried because he had these great insights into how we are afraid of sadness. I liked that because i wanted to do some research into what kind of role emotion plays in cool and how different emotions could lead to different views on some one's level of "coolness." Anyway, this one point got me because i think that advertising companies have really attacked that. Money cant buy you love, but it can buy you happiness and nowadays that is really all that matters. People want to be happy and even in an unstable economy, money is still just paper that was made to be spent. There are people, like Matt Fried, are paid to tell you are unhappy, but just hearing it makes them happy, gives them the knowledge and permission to be unhappy. There are pills and drugs to make people happy. With all of these new products, happiness really can just be bought in a little pill bottle.
In Merchants of Cool, we are exposed to how the advertising industry is trying to use us and take advantage of our money, because at our age, we want to be cool and we don't need to make money because we are given it by our parents, and whatever money we are given we spend on what we think is cool. Or to make us cool, and cool is happiness. Parents give it to us to make us happy and what we spend it on makes us even happier. We don't always have it, but we always need it.
What i am trying to say but i kind of lost track of along the way, is that they want to make money off of you, while you make money off of them, it is an everlasting circle of fun that comes with a side dish of pain and suffering, all to live the dream, you aren't hearing any complaints from me though

Tuesday, December 8, 2009

HW 28 - Informal Research

  • "Cool." Dictionary.reference.com. 2009. Random House Dictionary, Web. 8 Dec 2009. .
This was the official dictionary definition of cool and i thought that was a good place to start because i mean that is what people refer back too. We rely on it so it needs to be correct, but putting a debatable word in like cool is like putting life in the dictionary. Anyway i thought it was a good jumping off point.
The reason i chose this was because it was a good point to argue from, like it has the definition "unaffected by emotions; disinterested; dispassionate." I thought this was interesting and that was the main reason behind it being here. Other then that i really didn't have much else to put in.

  • "Hulu Homepage." Hulu.com. Web. 8 Dec 2009. .
Hulu.com is a website where people can go and watch full length television shows for free. Most of them are comedy and others are serious. I viewed it as cool because it has shows that i love and when they aren't on television anymore i can still go there and watch them.
The reason that this is cool is because it is free and open to the public. It is stress free and i can go there and numb my mind out to endless episodes of SNL or The Office. It is a great place to go when i am too lazy to turn the t.v. or i missed my favorite show because for some strange reason i forgot to put my schedule for the day around that hour or half hour of programming. I think that is cool

  • "Urban Dictionary Homepage." Urbandictionary.com. Web. 8 Dec 2009. .
Oh Urbandictionary.com, it is the rude and crude version of wikipedia.com. It has information, non of it useful. Its funny and crude and that is what makes it cool. People go there to look up their names and see the funny things people wrote about it. Anyone can post a definition. That's what makes it fun.
To me forums are funny because its watching people argue on the Internet. Arguing on the Internet is utterly pointless because no one has a face, anyone can be anonymous and have the power to say and do as they please. So watching people express their feelings about something but bring down someone else in the process is entertaining from an outsiders point of view, not because someone is being hurt, it is because they are arguing and going back and forth at each other when it doesn't really matter. Being a spectator is cool especially when things start to get intense.

Other "Cool" Sources:
  • Facebook
  • Mylifeisaverage.com
  • Funnyjunk.com
  • Netflix.com
  • Imeem.com
The reason those are there is because those are what i like. I like to be entertained and i like to laugh and when i don't want to laugh i want to listen to music and these are all websites that allow me to do those things. For that i am grateful and because of that they are "cool" in my mind. But then again that is just my opinion so does it really matter to the masses? My guess would be no, but then again, just because someone says i should care, does that mean i should listen? What role does our HUMANITY play in this epic battle?

Thursday, December 3, 2009

HW 27 - Informal Research - Interviews and Surveys

Alright, so I asked my family, friends, and random strangers what they think it means to be cool, and surprisingly they all didn’t say what you said they would. Albeit most of them did, but there was 2 examples who didn’t. The first person that I interviewed on the street gave me the best interview of all of them. When I walked up to him and started the interview and said something about the “cool” unit he laughed, he said, “I don’t think I am the right person to be asking.” I said, “why not, I just want to know what you think “cool” is.” He responded with, “to me a cool person is someone who is courteous, outgoing and friendly, it doesn’t matter what they wear or what race they are, its about the personality to me.” When I asked about someone who was popular or badass, he laughed and said, “hey as long as they are courteous and friendly I don’t really care.” I didn’t really realize the power of those words as first but now when I think about it I really start to think about it, I really realize the power behind his words. They could be deaf, blind, rich, poor, short, tall, pretty, ugly, to him it wouldn’t matter as long as they were courteous, I like that, I mean everyone has their cracking point but at least he didn’t give me some bulls*&$ answer about individualism or being rich like most of the other strangers did. They all wanted some one funny, this guy was just looking for a good friend or something like that. He seemed like a pretty cool guy too. The other person who I interviewed was my mother, usually, we don’t have big thanksgiving dinners with the family, because, well we don’t really have a big family, so we spend it in the New York Rescue Mission. Besides, she is the coolest person I know. What she said was that being cool was being self-assured. Not in like a jackass way, but in a way where you are ok in your own skin. Whether this was on your list or not, it came from my mother and to me, that means more then anything. What I am trying to get at, is that your right, if you want to be able to catagorize everyone then yes there is definitely a category for everyone. But not everyone is going to willingly be put there, sometimes people don’t act like you think they would, that’s why, by the bible’s standards, no man is god, it is a being that can be everyone and everything because one man can’t see through everyone’s eyes.

Tuesday, December 1, 2009

HW 26 - Photos & Questions

For all of my interviews i asked the same question. I asked Why are you wearing what you are wearing? They all had different outfits and it said something different about each of their personalities. I know the pictures aren't very good quality so i will do my best to describe the outfit.
Ayinde Stevens
He is wearing a Button down, collared shirt, a green sweater, khakis, and white athletic Shoes. Then the leather jacket, big framed glasses and a hat. Topped off with a messenger bag. When asked why he was wearing it he gave 3 answers.
  • Its a school uniform
  • It is the suckiest thing on earth
  • It is all i know how to wear.
The reason i chose to photograph him is because he always dresses like this, not that this is a bad thing, but it is rare to see some one who dresses formally and doesn't change after school because they don't want people to judge them. He gets my respect because just from hanging out with him, he is who he is. He has his own unique personality that is unlike anything i have seen before. People dress to impress. Ayinde dresses how he wants, albeit heavily influenced from school, it is still under his control and that is what he chooses. I really liked his final answer because it admits reality. Whether or not he looks at it like you do, he still looks at like it is life. He accepts that. That is why i think he is cool


Eliana Slurzberg
She is wearing a Green puffyish shirt, High Rise Jeans, Uggs, an Afghan scarf and a Beanie Hat. She also has some cool dangly earrings that you can't really see. When asked why she was wearing that she gave 3 responses.
  • I don't know
  • Extension of my personality
  • Why Not?
She is much different from Ayinde. She isn't wearing "preppy" clothing. Yet she isn't wearing designer clothing (to my knowledge). She is wearing clothing that she likes the look of. Aside from matching she likes it. I wear some jeans more then others because i like them more. Maybe they are more comfortable or maybe because they look nicer to me. But she is wearing that because as she said "Why Not?" Those clothes represent who she is to her. Not to her friends or her family. They had an influence on her but she took it and made it her own because even if you could put every one in different groups, they would still all be different in the end because everyone is different.


Willow Levine
She is wearing a grey t-shirt, red and black checkered jeans, Vans with blue and red laces. She is holding a hoodie with pink shoe laces on the sides. She is wearing a guitar pic locket and is holding a jacket, a bag and roller skates. She also has a whole ton of ear piercings and gauges. When asked why she was wearing/had all that, she said:
  • Cuz i Like it
  • It Expresses Who i am
  • This is how my friends dress
To me those were some pretty respectable answers because they were honest. That is why people dress how they dress. Friends and to show who they are. They have their own ideas that they can take and exchange with friends. It is a style that not everyone can appreciate yet she does it anyway. Maybe because friends are what count to her. I can't think for her but i would have to guess that she dresses like that because her friends had that kind of influence on her and then she took it where it needed to go. The way i dress expresses who i want to be, i like it, and some of my friends dress like that. I don't wear the colorful clothing but i have the Nikes. I got that from them. But I still dress how i want to dress and whether or not other people have an influence on me i can still make it my own just as these three people, who i can also call my friends, did.

Monday, November 23, 2009

HW 25 - Story Comments and Analysis

Conor,
i really liked you story because it isn't blatantly cool. It is almost a real life example. You really exemplify what teenagers act like. You demonstrate how teenagers really don't care what others think of them. They do what they think is cool and don't change for other people. Anyway, i feel somewhat connected to this story because i feel like this something we would do. But yeah, i really did like your story.
Sam

Omar,
i like how you were able to concentrate this story into a short walk down a hallway and really emphasize how teenagers get along. Its not just that the main character was cool but they all were because they were able to put their problems behind them and focus on what they were there for. It has dialogue which makes it a lot easier to picture and i could really feel like i am there.
Sam

Evan,
When i read this story on Friday i really liked it. I thought you really had the right idea when you were describing how he really is struggling internally on whether or not he wants to be cool and what the cost of cool really is. Was the B worth it to not look like such a smart kid. Is there really something wrong with smart. I think you did an excellent job of answering these questions and i really enjoyed seeing what you think "cool" really is
Sam

Arden, I really like how you focus on one main character and his ideas, i can see how your reflection of cool is put into both of them. The new mysterious kid and the big jerk. They both have their appealing sides and they also both have that unappealing side. Dakota is quiet and nice and either not known or liked. But hawk is probably big, good looking and just a bad boy. Every girl likes the jerk. That makes him cool. But i think you really did do a good job of looking at two different sides. Sam

Esther, i really liked your story because it kind of gives a sense of normality into what this cool or uncool thing is, you can see he lives to suit his own needs and because of that he was more of his own person, i don't know how he is in school but in home i think that the idea you were getting out was that he was just a normal person living a normal life, he was cool because he was normal. Anyway i really enjoyed it. Sam

Something that all the stories had involved was that they all were about some one who was different but similar. They all were being themselves and the conflict was always a struggle with their friends or themselves about being cool. With Arden's and Omar's stories you see how similar they are in that it is two clearly different people struggling for power. In Conor and Evan's stories it is about people struggling to fit in.
What i really found interesting is how all these stories had different roots but they all ended the same. and that is what the final result is. In Conor's story it ends in disappointment for the main character because he was shut down. In Esther's story it ends in her getting to school late because she procrastinated. In Arden's story it begins in a description and it ends up in a fight because of the discrepiscancy between the two. The point i am trying to make here is that these stories all start the same but end differently. Everyone has a different idea of cool and because of that everyone is going to write a different story

Thursday, November 19, 2009

Short Story (HW 24)

She walked into his school for the first time, It had that smell, the smell of bad school lunch and lead based paint. Anyone who has ever gone to a public school knows that smell but yet you never get used to it. The first thing she did was walk up to his friends and greet the same way that she always did, with the slight head nod and then a big hug. They stood there for a second looking around at each other and noticing what 2 months apart could do to them. For the first time it always looked like a lot. They were tan, taller and skinnier. Something that always seemed to fade away over the course of the year. They were in the middle of poking fun at each other when he came over. There was something about him too but this was not the usual changes. His hair was darker not lighter and he had this new glow about him. None of them said it, but they all knew it. How could someone look so different in just 2 months? They didn't dare say anything they just carried on as they always did. They sat and went over their summers one by one. To some people their group was cool and to others their group was a little nerdy. But they didn't care. They were all good friends. But it happened almost immediately. Other girls started noticing him too. They had never really taken a serious interest in him and now all of a sudden he was the center of attention. He was almost instantly popular. Within days he was the toast of the school. Everyone wanted to be him, or at least be like him. His friends were kind of lost in her sudden onset of power but he seemed unaffected by it. It was almost as if nothing had happened. He still hung out with his group. He still put up with them when she could have easily have pushed them away and moved on. It kind of confused her though, she didn't know what everyone saw in him. He was still his same old friend but now to everyone else he was the coolest person.She didn't know what to do but he was still her friend and because of that she was still happy.What made him so cool was that he didn't change because of what people thought of him. He was still the same person who he always was. It like the fame never got to him. Maybe it was because nothing got to him. He was always distanced. But who were we to judge, we were just like her. Thats what made our group so close. We didn't like change, so we kind of distanced ourselves from change. We just were ourselves. Maybe we didn't get what being cool meant, but then again, we just didn't really care.

Monday, November 16, 2009

HW #23 What is Cool?

Cool isn't a just how a person is, it is a feeling. It is a vibe that a person gives off. It can be their looks, their gender, how they dress, how they talk, their personality, or as i said before, it could just be the vibe they give you. Cool makes or breaks a person. Everyone wants to be the cool kid but sometimes its just doesn't work like that. Trying to be cool doesn't work because the harder you try the less cool you look and it doesn't matter to most people how cool you fell, it is how cool other people think you are. This is a dog eat dog world and can be pretty vicious, but i guess that is what makes it so interesting.
While discussing in class what are the main and smaller ideas of being popular, i decided that standing out but in an accepted way is what is the main idea. Everyone wants to be different and the person who does is the person who everyone wants to be like. That is what makes them cool. They are new and different but the main idea that everyone is missing is that there is no such thing as originality. They don't just wake up and think that "oh i am going to do this today" for no reason. They always base the way they act of something else. Originality is cool to me, but does it really exist? Can someone be completely original or do they have to base their ideas off someone else and then go from there? Does it really matter?
Finally i just want to ask, does it really matter to be cool? I mean learn, laugh, live right? I think that if i can get by with my friends and not be Mr. popular then i can live with that. In the end i want to be the person who i want to be and not have to change or keep up my appearance to stay that way. If i have people around me who accept me for who i am then i don't give a damn what anyone else really thinks. I think that being "cool" is for the people who don't know who they are and want other people to tell them. I do care what other people think of me. But i don't live my life by their opinion. I want to make myself and my real friends happy. Whenever i think, i want to be popular, i just think, would i like to have 10 untrustworthy and not dependable friends or 3 trustworthy and dependable friends that i can call anytime i have a problem or just want to talk to someone. As of right now that is what i think. I really want to see where this unit goes though. I feel like you have a lot up your sleeve. So yeah i don't really know how to leave this off on a meaningful note so i just want to ask. Do you care about being "cool?"

Thursday, November 12, 2009

My Art Project


My art wasn’t made to change anyone’s beliefs or make them think any different of themselves. I made this art because this is what I believe. I am not saying that it is the right way but I am saying that you need to be careful. Technology and change can be dangerous things because it makes everything faster and smarter and it is possible to progress beyond ourselves. We need to be careful of what we are doing otherwise it may overwhelm us and shake the very roots of our existence. From personal experiences I have learned that dependency can be a dangerous thing and that depending on anything too much can lead do your downfall or demise as it may be. If we don’t look at where we are headed then we might not like where we end up. I made this piece in representation of a hostage situation. Technology is taking our minds hostage and there is no ransom. We have to learn how to get it back ourselves. I loved making this piece because it allowed me to base my art on several forms and the most powerful form of propaganda is fear. I made this to strike fear but in a way that they wont get down on their knees but now be a little more aware. I know I am not Martin Scocase but I believe that this had the grainy and basic feel that I wanted. I took my brother, a flashlight, and a Flip Video camera and we went into an empty apartment and I told him to read the script with authority and a deep voice and that was the result. It wasn’t the first time he read it but it was what I was looking for. This was a script that I wrote myself but took inspiration from scripts that had a similar background from other movies such as Live Free Or Die Hard Featuring Bruce Willis. I hope you see this video as I saw it and possibly understand the message I am trying to convey.

Sunday, November 8, 2009

Final Essay

My Sanity/Existence/Life in a Nutshell

By Sam Jossen

Introduction:

I, Sam Jossen, as a human inhabitant of Planet Earth, do not like or enjoy change, it messes up the peace and order in civilization. If everyone were happy where he or she was then there would be no need for competition or war or hate. But that can’t happen. Humans as a whole strive to be better. We want to accomplish more and be better then everyone else, and if everyone is doing this then everyone is going to push everyone else to be better. We often push each other too far and that is what starts wars and mass killings of another type of human. What separates humans from technology is our ability to show emotions. That is our humanity. Humanity as described by the Merriam-Webster dictionary is “the quality or state of being humane.” The state of being human is one thing but the quality is another. What is a good quality of humanity and what can affect it? What would make the quality better or worse? I think the answer is pretty simple. It all boils down to communication. That is the reason why we are on the top of the food chain. We can communicate with each other. Humans as a whole do not like to be disconnected from everyone and because of that they like to have people who they can talk to or even just be in the presence of. They need to be loved and feel compassion. That is what separates us. Now this doesn’t apply to all people. Some people turn to a god for assistance and others turn to another human. It depends on your beliefs but in the end it is the idea of someone else being there that gets you through the day. What the internet is doing to us is pulling each other away from one another, but giving us the idea that we are still together by putting a middle man in there. This middleman comes in the place of a cell phone or a computer with AIM or facebook on it. Technology is slowly taking us away from people and replacing those people with the very computer that sits on my lap right now. This computer gives me access to an infinite amount of knowledge and all I have to do is type in the right words and I can have it. But now is this trade worth it? Is the knowledge really worth the loneliness? I think that it isn’t that is why I believe that the digital age has caused us expose our inner souls and show that we are exchanging our humanity for technology.

Argument 1:

We are becoming less social and more digital. With the ever-friendly Internet at our fingertips people are beginning to loose what is really human in them. Going outside is becoming a chore and meeting new people is becoming scarier then ever. Staring at a screen for hours at a time. While writing this much of the paper I have had little to no interaction with other human beings. I have either stopped for a second to go browse the Internet but other then that I have been sitting in the same spot doing nothing but staring at this mind-numbing screen. I can’t even focus, not because this paper isn’t of interest to me. But because this is getting increasingly lonely and that is a feeling that I don’t personally enjoy. In Feed By M.T. Anderson, you are introduced to characters who are thoroughly unhappy but they don’t know that because they have everything they could ever want.

“I ordered a pair of draft pants from Multitude. It was a real Bargain. I ordered another pair, I ordered pair after pair. I ordered them all in the same color. They were slate. I was ordering them as quickly as I could. I put in my address again and again. I was shivering with the cold on my butt. My arms were around my legs. I ordered pants after pants. I put tracking orders on them. I tracked each one. I could feel them moving through the system… I stayed up all through the early morning, shivering, ordering, ordering, and was awake at dawn, when I put on clothes, and went up to the surface, and watched the shit-stupid sun rise over the shit-stupid world.” (Pg 294).

The reason that he is unhappy is because having everything you want just given to you isn’t very pleasing. He is realizing that there was more out there then the Feed and bargains. They were living in a protected bubble and when that bubble popped then the spell is broken and everything becomes very scary all of a sudden. He overloaded. He didn’t know what was real anymore and he just did all he knew how to do, which was buy and consume. He did what he was bred to do. He never knew anything else because he was given the feed at a very early age. It is similar to putting advertising for Pepsi in a preschool. I don’t think that parents would stand for that, yet in Feed if you don’t have one you are an outcast, so in a messed up sense, the parents want their kids to be advertised to by all the major corporations. They are sacrificing what was once right for the ability to know everything. Is this really a stretch from what we are doing? My cousin has a cell phone and he is only 8 years old. He has his own computer and email address. These kinds of things are just the roots for how any big corporation can get in and take hold.

Argument 2:

Another excellent example of antisocial behavior also comes from Feed. Everyone has AIM in their head so when he doesn’t want to talk to someone he can just ignore them and delete their messages so its like they were never even sent. “She tried chatting me a few times since she sent me the list, but I had on my busy signal.”(Pg 237). This quote is short and sweet; it really shows how having AIM in your head is better then talking. You can avoid people but not be offensive about it. You can pretend like you aren’t getting messages when you really are. It gives you the option to talk to people or not too. This is exactly how becoming antisocial starts. If choose to avoid people then it becomes a trend. It doesn’t happen automatically. But when you are given the option, you will slowly begin to phase out people you don’t like and therefore miss out on many possible social experiences. So infinite knowledge, yes, being able to hold an interesting conversation, no.

Argument 3:

We are using the computer to become smarter but we are loosing our ability to talk to another person. When I think of a way that the Internet could be displayed in a life like manner. I think of a robot. Something without emotions that only feed you answers. In Brave New World by Aldous Huxley, all the characters are very robotic in their movements and about what they think and feel because they are all, quite literally, conditioned to do certain things and believe them unconditionally. They don’t really have a train of thought, and when presented with a new idea they get scared.

“Bernard felt extremely uncomfortable. A man so conventional, so scrupulously correct at the Director—and to commit so gross a solecism! It made him want to hide his face, to run out of the room. Not that he himself saw anything intrinsically objectionable in people talking about the remote past; that was one of those hypnopaedic prejudices he had (so he imagined) completely got rid. What made him feel shy was the knowledge that the director disapproved—disapproved and yet had been betrayed into doing the forbidden thing. Under what inward compulsion? Through his discomfort Bernard eagerly listened. (Pg 96)

He didn’t know what to do. The director is the man in charge. He is the equivalent of President Obama, and when a person of such power says things that are so strange and new, we can’t help but be confused and a little bit scared. The only problem was, what he said in the sentences before the quote wasn’t something that was new information. It was information that was kept from the people because it would give them independent ideas and things like that are what make people start thinking revolutionary thoughts. When he was presented with this new idea he couldn’t think of anything to say really. He was conditioned to believe different ideas. That is the idea of technology, to introduce new ideas but integrate them. The only problem is when they are too integrated into our society. Then they become a problem. When people start depending on technology to live then there is a problem. When people don’t have their own thought process because of technology, then there is a problem.

Argument 4:

For all of its negatives, the Internet has given us one amazing gift, the gift of knowledge. Because of the Internet we have access to Millions of online databases that can tell us whatever we want to know, whenever we want to know it. On the Internet you can get other peoples opinions on matters that concern you, and if you weed through all the junk you might find something that might actually help you. That is one of the main problems with the information on the Internet; there is a lot of junk or nonsense. There are things that people put there just to mess with you or so you get the wrong answer. Many people think that everyone on the Internet is there to help you and if you ask a question, then they will answer is correctly and politely. But this very often isn’t the case. User run sites like Wikipedia.com can be hazardous to use as information in a paper. “If there’s going to be a free encyclopedia, I’d like there to be a better free encyclopedia. It has bothered me that I helped to get a project started, Wikipedia, that people are misusing in this way”(Larry Sanger, Co-Founder Wikipedia). Trust isn’t about what you do; it is about how you do it. An action can mean anything; it’s all about how it is presented. My words right now can mean anything but that is getting off topic. What this all means is that we are loosing ourselves in our trust to the Internet and by trading real life friends for the Internet then we start to base everything we believe in on the Internet. By trading one lie for a different one, we are basically trading one source of knowledge for another. We are trading our friends and humanity for these brightly colored screens in front of us.

Counter argument/Connections/Significance:

With people come conflict and with conflict comes hate, unhappiness and war. If we cut ourselves from each other then we can cut out any bad feelings. We wouldn’t be self-conscious or buy not comfortable, expensive clothing. Life could be about leading a fulfilling and happy life without ever having to hold a conversation with another human in person, because lets be honest, talking to someone in person, you don’t have the same time to think and make your ideas better so you sound smarter or better “spoken.” Its things like that, which could make us all, seem better. There is a show called the Twilight Zone, there is one specific episode, which represents this point. It is called Time Enough At Last. This Episode is about a man named Henry Bemis who absolutely loves to read, but everyone else think it is just horrendous that he does. His boss threatens to fire him for taking his lunch down into the vault to read, and his wife hides the books and magazines so he can’t read them. She wants him to be more social. One day he is reading in the vault and he sees the headlines about the new H-Bomb, then there is an explosion and when he comes up, everything is gone. He doesn’t know what to do, there is food but he begins to get lonely. Then he finds the library, and as he is bending down to get a book his glasses fall off and shatter, his thick glasses that he can’t see without. He didn’t need people he needed books and without those glasses he couldn’t read. What this has to do with the counter argument is that not everyone needs people, they can be happy with books or the Internet. They don’t need to have interaction with other humans as long as they have some other distraction. In our day and age this new distraction is called the Internet. They just need the time.

Conclusion:

Technology can make crazy people sane and sane people crazy. The idea of it is not to “inform the public,” but to advertise to us. Well that is what I believe. The Internet was invented as a defense system for the United States after Russia launched the satellite Sputnik (www.walthowe.com). It quickly became mainstream and quickly following, became a major source of advertisements. You could advertise to specific groups and have more successful ads. The point behind this is that something that starts out for a bad reason (war) could only end badly. We have had scares before with Y2K which was when all the major world powers were afraid that the computers would stop working because dates were saved as the last two digits so it would go from, 99 to, 00. Which many feared would reset the computers and set the banks back to zero. Although it was avoided, it still caused mass panic because people need technology. Everything is digital and if it were to fail us then we would be set back to the Stone Age. Now we are almost fully dependant on technology and because of that we wouldn’t know what to do if we had it taken away. For the most part, people need to be connected to each other. That is what the Internet is, the real time data from all the computers in the world being linked up. If they were all separate then it wouldn’t work as a system. That is what still confuses us as humans. We are willing to put our faith in technology instead of humans because technology doesn’t judge us. It provides answers. It doesn’t show compassion, it just answers and to most people that is what they want. So what are humans truly exchanging their humanity for technology? The answer comes simply in asking yourself; would you still be as close to your friends if you didn’t have a phone or a computer?

Sources:

  • Feed By M.T. Anderson
  • Wordpress.com (Lary Sanger)
  • Brave New World By Aldous Huxley
  • A Brief History of the Internet-Walt Howe (www.walthowe.com)
  • The Twilight Zone-Time Enough At Last By Rod Serling

My Grades

my grades are
POV: 4
Evidence: 3
Effective Organization: 3
Connections and Significance: 4
Opposing POV: 3
Communication Written: 3
Communication Performance: 3
Total 23

Essay Comments

Evan,
i think that you do have a good strong point to your essay here, i mean it is sound in its arguments. i just strongly disagree with your main argument being your main argument. I think that it is just a basic question. i know you are smart but i think that it really has no orgionality. I think that you could have done so much more. I mean look at your counter-argument. It has an origional idea and it is presented well. I am not saying to redo your paper but expand on that idea. If you just work with that idea you really have something. I never thought about smoke signals or telegrams like that. They are the same basic idea but yet we are getting up tight about the internet. There is so much potential yet you dont utilize it. I think that this paper has all it needs but i just dont see any origionlity too it. I mean thats what i was looking for its up to you though. what you have is strong but i think that it could be creative. Its up to you though...to continue my comment
i think this paper is great but there is no heart behind it
my grades are
POV: 2.5
Evidence: 3
Effective Organization: 3
Connections and Significance: 4
Opposing POV: 4
Communication Written: 3
Communication Performance: 3
Total 22.5

Devin, since neither of my partners have an essay and you didn't have any comments i decided to look at yours and i have to say i really was impressed. You really did a great job opening your essay and really caught my attention and i think your evidence really connects to what the average teenager does. You connected it to some issues that really affect us on a day to day basis and can become impending threats. I think you base your thesis a little too much on FEED, and that could have been a problem but i think you work it out amazingly.

my grades are
POV: 4
Evidence: 3
Effective Organization: 3
Connections and Significance: 4
Opposing POV: 4
Communication Written: 3
Communication Performance: 3
Total 24

Tuesday, November 3, 2009

Digitalization Paper

Digitalization Paper

By Sam Jossen

Humanity as described by the Merriam-Webster dictionary is “the quality or state of being humane.” The state of being human is one thing but the quality is another. What is a good quality of humanity and what can affect it? What would make the quality better or worse? I think the answer is pretty simple. It all boils down to communication. That is the reason why we are on the top of the food chain. We can communicate with each other. Humans as a whole do not like to be disconnected from everyone and because of that they like to have people who they can talk to or even just be in the presence of. They need to be loved and feel compassion. That is what separates us. Now this doesn’t apply to all people. Some people turn to a god for assistance and others turn to another human. It depends on your beliefs but in the end it is the idea of someone else being there that gets you through the day. What the internet is doing to us is pulling each other away from one another, but giving us the idea that we are still together by putting a middle man in there. This middleman comes in the place of a cell phone or a computer with AIM or facebook on it. Technology is slowly taking us away from people and replacing those people with the very computer that sits on my lap right now. This computer gives me access to an infinite amount of knowledge and all I have to do is type in the right words and I can have it. But now is this trade worth it? Is the knowledge really worth the loneliness? I think that it isn’t that is why I believe that the digital age has caused us expose our inner souls and show that we are exchanging our humanity for technology.

We are becoming less social and more digital. With the ever-friendly Internet at our fingertips people are beginning to loose what is really human to them. Going outside is becoming a chore and meeting new people is becoming scarier then ever. Staring at a screen for hours at a time. While writing this much of the paper I have had little to no interaction with other human beings. I have either stopped for a second to go browse the Internet but other then that I have been sitting in the same spot doing nothing but staring at this mind-numbing screen. I can’t even focus, not because this paper isn’t of interest to me. But because this is getting increasingly lonely and that is a feeling that I don’t personally enjoy. In Feed By M.T. Anderson, you are introduced to characters who are thoroughly unhappy but they don’t know that because they have everything they could ever want.

“I ordered a pair of draft pants from Multitude. It was a real Bargain. I ordered another pair, I ordered pair after pair. I ordered them all in the same color. They were slate. I was ordering them as quickly as I could. I put in my address again and again. I was shivering with the cold on my butt. My arms were around my legs. I ordered pants after pants. I put tracking orders on them. I tracked each one. I could feel them moving through the system… I stayed up all through the early morning, shivering, ordering, ordering, and was awake at dawn, when I put on clothes, and went up to the surface, and watched the shit-stupid sun rise over the shit-stupid world.” (Pg 294).

The reason that he is unhappy is because having everything you want just given to you isn’t very pleasing. He is realizing that there was more out there then the Feed and bargains. They were living in a protected bubble and when that bubble popped then the spell is broken and everything becomes very scary all of a sudden. He overloaded. He didn’t know what was real anymore and he just did all he knew how to do, which was buy and consume. He did what he was breed to do. He never knew anything else because he was given the feed at a very early age. It is similar to putting advertising for Pepsi in a preschool. I don’t think that parents would stand for that, yet in Feed if you don’t have one you are an outcast, so in a messed up sense, the parents want their kids to be advertised to by all the major corporations. They are sacrificing what was once right for the ability to know everything. Is this really a stretch from what we are doing? My cousin has a cell phone and he is only 8 years old. He has his own computer and email address. These kinds of things are just the roots for how any big corporation can get in and take hold.

Another excellent example of antisocial behavior also comes from Feed. Everyone has AIM in their head so when he doesn’t want to talk to someone he can just ignore them and delete their messages so its like they were never even sent. “She tried chatting me a few times since she sent me the list, but I had on my busy signal.”(Pg 237). This quote is short and sweet; it really shows how having AIM in your head is better then talking. You can avoid people but not be offensive about it. You can pretend like you aren’t getting messages when you really are. It gives you the option to talk to people or not too. This is exactly how becoming antisocial starts. If choose to avoid people then it becomes a trend. It doesn’t happen automatically. But when you are given the option, you will slowly begin to phase out people you don’t like and therefore miss out on many possible social experiences. So infinite knowledge, yes, being able to hold an interesting conversation, no.

For all of its negatives, the Internet has given us one amazing gift, the gift of knowledge. Because of the Internet we have access to Millions of online databases that can tell us whatever we want to know, whenever we want to know it. On the Internet you can get other peoples opinions on matters that concern you, and if you weed through all the junk you might find something that might actually help you. That is one of the main problems with the information on the Internet; there is a lot of junk or nonsense. There are things that people put there just to mess with you or so you get the wrong answer. Many people think that everyone on the Internet is there to help you and if you ask a question, then they will answer is correctly and politely. But this very often isn’t the case. User run sites like Wikipedia.com can be hazardous to use as information in a paper. “If there’s going to be a free encyclopedia, I’d like there to be a better free encyclopedia. It has bothered me that I helped to get a project started, Wikipedia, that people are misusing in this way”(Larry Sanger, Co-Founder Wikipedia). Trust isn’t about what you do; it is about how you do it. An action can mean anything; it’s all about how it is presented. My words right now can mean anything but that is getting off topic. What this all means is that we are loosing ourselves in our trust to the Internet and because of that we don’t really know who we are. We don’t know what is true anymore because we can’t go out and get it. We always have to believe what some one else says. It doesn’t matter what they say, it’s all about credibility.

We are using the computer to become smarter but we are loosing our ability to talk to another person. When I think of a way that the Internet could be displayed in a life like manner. I think of a robot. Something without emotions that only feed you answers. In Brave New World by Aldous Huxley, all the characters are very robotic in their movements and about what they think and feel because they are all, quite literally, conditioned to do certain things and believe them unconditionally. They don’t really have a train of thought, and when presented with a new idea they get scared.

“Bernard felt extremely uncomfortable. A man so conventional, so scrupulously correct at the Director—and to commit so gross a solecism! It made him want to hide his face, to run out of the room. Not that he himself saw anything intrinsically objectionable in people talking about the remote past; that was one of those hypnopaedic prejudices he had (so he imagined) completely got rid. What made him feel shy was the knowledge that the director disapproved—disapproved and yet had been betrayed into doing the forbidden thing. Under what inward compulsion? Through his discomfort Bernard eagerly listened. (Pg 96)

He didn’t know what to do. The director is the man in charge. He is the equivalent of President Obama, and when a person of such power says things that are so strange and new, we can’t help but be confused and a little bit scared. The only problem was, what he said in the sentences before the quote wasn’t something that was new information. It was information that was kept from the people because it would give them independent ideas and things like that are what make people start thinking revolutionary thoughts. When he was presented with this new idea he couldn’t think of anything to say really. He was conditioned to believe different ideas. That is the idea of technology, to introduce new ideas but integrate them. The only problem is when they are too integrated into our society. Then they become a problem. When people start depending on technology to live then there is a problem. When people don’t have their own thought process because of technology, then there is a problem.

Technology can make crazy people sane and sane people crazy. The idea of it is not to “inform the public,” but to advertise to us. Well that is what I believe. The Internet was invented as a defense system for the United States after Russia launched the satellite Sputnik (www.walthowe.com). It quickly became mainstream and quickly following, became a major source of advertisements. You could advertise to specific groups and have more successful ads. The point behind this is that something that starts out for a bad reason (war) could only end badly. We have had scares before with Y2K which was when all the major world powers were afraid that the computers would stop working because dates were saved as the last two digits so it would go from, 99 to, 00. Which many feared would reset the computers and set the banks back to zero. Although it was avoided, it still caused mass panic because people need technology. Everything is digital and if it were to fail us then we would be set back to the Stone Age. Now we are almost fully dependant on technology and because of that we wouldn’t know what to do if we had it taken away. For the most part, people need to be connected to each other. That is what the Internet is, the real time data from all the computers in the world being linked up. If they were all separate then it wouldn’t work as a system. That is what still confuses us as humans. We are willing to put our faith in technology instead of humans because technology doesn’t judge us. It provides answers. It doesn’t show compassion, it just answers and to most people that is what they want. So what are humans truly exchanging their humanity for technology? The answer comes simply in asking yourself; would you still be as close to your friends if you didn’t have a phone or a computer?

Sources:

  • Feed By M.T. Anderson
  • Wordpress.com (Lary Sanger)
  • Brave New World By Aldous Huxley
  • A Brief History of the Internet-Walt Howe (www.walthowe.com)

Monday, November 2, 2009

Hw 17-Blog comments

Will:
I really like the point you are trying to prove here because people really are becoming more social people and you can't just try to avoid it. Because you need to fit in and be apart of social networking. But by doing that you loose who you are as a person. You loose all self identity in the idea to be what everyone wants you to be. What i disagree with is that privacy is something people knowingly and willingly give up. You should focus on why people would do something like that and how that type of thing is encouraged and why. What type of privacy is necessary and what type is still accesable if any is still avaible to the public without a cost. So what is the cost will?

Quinn:
I thought your thesis has great potential but is way to broad, technology itself is such a broad topic, i think you should focus much more on one topic and then argue that, like what will did with facebook and privacy and how we are loosing our privacy. Or maybe how video games affect us in a certain way and what that represents to you. What does technology represent to you? Something is important. But you really need to focus on something, you have some info is here and you really need to focus that in on something specific

Sunday, November 1, 2009

HW 16 -Big Paper Outline 1

My Thesis:
The digital age has caused us expose our inner souls and show that we are exchanging our humanity for knowledge.

Argument 1: We are becoming less social and more digital, we are loosing our grasp on reality (use FEED)
Argument 2: We are learning more and becoming more in-touch with world events (infinite source of knowledge at our fingertips)
Argument 3: We are using the computer to become smarter but we are loosing our ability to talk to another person, we are becoming one with the internet.

Evidence 1: Feed
  • Knowing everything but everyone is the same and does what they are told, are all under control of the feed
Evidence 2: Brave New World
  • Conditioning and how they only believe what they are told to believe and change is scary and can lead people to do stupid things.
Evidence 3: Wall-E
  • People are absorbed by the technology around them and because of that they aren't really humans anymore, just robots with feelings
Evidence 4: Various Class Notes
  • Peoples quotes, examples of overdoses of internet and how it is becoming overwhelming and has the power to make us do what we want
Additional notes/questions:
  • What is the difference between humans and robots?
  • Is it possible to resist the "Feed?"
  • Is change a good thing or a bad thing?
  • Why is this topic so heavily debated?

Monday, October 26, 2009

Hw 15-ABCDEF 3-Treasure Hunting

To Quinn,
Just to start off, i really like your overall idea that technology is infact bad and doing more bad then good to us. Like how facebook is destroying our friendships and our addiction to technology is growing stronger by the day. The reason i choose to write the comment on this is because i really feel like this is your best work, you really start off strong by going in depth with you research on M.T.Anderson. Then you didn't stop, you really went in deep with your connections to facebook and how the technology we already we have is just like feed, we are only steps from having it already in our heads. That is what i really liked. It really brings our life and this book together. It shows us how we really aren't that far behind these people. Like how we have a "Feed" on facebook and how it keeps us updated on our friends recent activity, i just think things like that are really what are keeping us down. Some suggestions i have is to work on you grammar (small stuff), and to show the other side of the arguement. Show what good stuff is happening and how that can positively help us. You have some very contriditory ideas, such as how you said it was hard to live without talking to your girlfriend and similar stuff, but in your blog you talk about how stupid it all is. Maybe technology is stupid but what it is doing is genious. Other then that i really found you comment and especially this blog post to be very helpful in terms of seeing your point of view, which is something that i can use later on in this class as a start off point, so a million thanks.
From,
Sam

To Will,
You really have some great ideas, just starting off with homework 13 i think you really prove a great point by showing us how feed is meant to show us who we are and by doing that causing us to change, because if we saw who we really were we wouldn't be very happy, than in 12 you prove a great point of how younger generations are frowned upon but older generations are respected for the things they did. Like what we are doing is disgraceful and stubborn or arrogant, we are wasting our lives and loosing our individuality. But in one or two generations we will be heroes for what we did and people will remember us for all the great things we did. But until then we are the punks. Then we get to the crown jewel. Number 13 is a work of art. You gave us the full truth. As uncensored as it may be you showed us how teenagers live and how different levels of anti social behavior and the effect it plays. How being detached from technology takes away contacting friends and brings on solitude. Then gorging yourself in technology is the exact same thing. If you don't leave the house so you can play video games then nothing has changed. These ideas could really be put to use on your art project with maybe a deeper study of the pysche of the teenage mind. Some of the biggest spots for improvement is the depth of your work. You have great ideas but you don't explain them. Its like the rough draft, you need to complete your work. Just take the time and finish your thoughts before moving on. But your ideas really do encourage some thought into who we are as people. And how the little things we do have a spiderweb effect. So thanks for your thoughts will
From,
Sam