Monday, November 23, 2009

HW 25 - Story Comments and Analysis

Conor,
i really liked you story because it isn't blatantly cool. It is almost a real life example. You really exemplify what teenagers act like. You demonstrate how teenagers really don't care what others think of them. They do what they think is cool and don't change for other people. Anyway, i feel somewhat connected to this story because i feel like this something we would do. But yeah, i really did like your story.
Sam

Omar,
i like how you were able to concentrate this story into a short walk down a hallway and really emphasize how teenagers get along. Its not just that the main character was cool but they all were because they were able to put their problems behind them and focus on what they were there for. It has dialogue which makes it a lot easier to picture and i could really feel like i am there.
Sam

Evan,
When i read this story on Friday i really liked it. I thought you really had the right idea when you were describing how he really is struggling internally on whether or not he wants to be cool and what the cost of cool really is. Was the B worth it to not look like such a smart kid. Is there really something wrong with smart. I think you did an excellent job of answering these questions and i really enjoyed seeing what you think "cool" really is
Sam

Arden, I really like how you focus on one main character and his ideas, i can see how your reflection of cool is put into both of them. The new mysterious kid and the big jerk. They both have their appealing sides and they also both have that unappealing side. Dakota is quiet and nice and either not known or liked. But hawk is probably big, good looking and just a bad boy. Every girl likes the jerk. That makes him cool. But i think you really did do a good job of looking at two different sides. Sam

Esther, i really liked your story because it kind of gives a sense of normality into what this cool or uncool thing is, you can see he lives to suit his own needs and because of that he was more of his own person, i don't know how he is in school but in home i think that the idea you were getting out was that he was just a normal person living a normal life, he was cool because he was normal. Anyway i really enjoyed it. Sam

Something that all the stories had involved was that they all were about some one who was different but similar. They all were being themselves and the conflict was always a struggle with their friends or themselves about being cool. With Arden's and Omar's stories you see how similar they are in that it is two clearly different people struggling for power. In Conor and Evan's stories it is about people struggling to fit in.
What i really found interesting is how all these stories had different roots but they all ended the same. and that is what the final result is. In Conor's story it ends in disappointment for the main character because he was shut down. In Esther's story it ends in her getting to school late because she procrastinated. In Arden's story it begins in a description and it ends up in a fight because of the discrepiscancy between the two. The point i am trying to make here is that these stories all start the same but end differently. Everyone has a different idea of cool and because of that everyone is going to write a different story

Thursday, November 19, 2009

Short Story (HW 24)

She walked into his school for the first time, It had that smell, the smell of bad school lunch and lead based paint. Anyone who has ever gone to a public school knows that smell but yet you never get used to it. The first thing she did was walk up to his friends and greet the same way that she always did, with the slight head nod and then a big hug. They stood there for a second looking around at each other and noticing what 2 months apart could do to them. For the first time it always looked like a lot. They were tan, taller and skinnier. Something that always seemed to fade away over the course of the year. They were in the middle of poking fun at each other when he came over. There was something about him too but this was not the usual changes. His hair was darker not lighter and he had this new glow about him. None of them said it, but they all knew it. How could someone look so different in just 2 months? They didn't dare say anything they just carried on as they always did. They sat and went over their summers one by one. To some people their group was cool and to others their group was a little nerdy. But they didn't care. They were all good friends. But it happened almost immediately. Other girls started noticing him too. They had never really taken a serious interest in him and now all of a sudden he was the center of attention. He was almost instantly popular. Within days he was the toast of the school. Everyone wanted to be him, or at least be like him. His friends were kind of lost in her sudden onset of power but he seemed unaffected by it. It was almost as if nothing had happened. He still hung out with his group. He still put up with them when she could have easily have pushed them away and moved on. It kind of confused her though, she didn't know what everyone saw in him. He was still his same old friend but now to everyone else he was the coolest person.She didn't know what to do but he was still her friend and because of that she was still happy.What made him so cool was that he didn't change because of what people thought of him. He was still the same person who he always was. It like the fame never got to him. Maybe it was because nothing got to him. He was always distanced. But who were we to judge, we were just like her. Thats what made our group so close. We didn't like change, so we kind of distanced ourselves from change. We just were ourselves. Maybe we didn't get what being cool meant, but then again, we just didn't really care.

Monday, November 16, 2009

HW #23 What is Cool?

Cool isn't a just how a person is, it is a feeling. It is a vibe that a person gives off. It can be their looks, their gender, how they dress, how they talk, their personality, or as i said before, it could just be the vibe they give you. Cool makes or breaks a person. Everyone wants to be the cool kid but sometimes its just doesn't work like that. Trying to be cool doesn't work because the harder you try the less cool you look and it doesn't matter to most people how cool you fell, it is how cool other people think you are. This is a dog eat dog world and can be pretty vicious, but i guess that is what makes it so interesting.
While discussing in class what are the main and smaller ideas of being popular, i decided that standing out but in an accepted way is what is the main idea. Everyone wants to be different and the person who does is the person who everyone wants to be like. That is what makes them cool. They are new and different but the main idea that everyone is missing is that there is no such thing as originality. They don't just wake up and think that "oh i am going to do this today" for no reason. They always base the way they act of something else. Originality is cool to me, but does it really exist? Can someone be completely original or do they have to base their ideas off someone else and then go from there? Does it really matter?
Finally i just want to ask, does it really matter to be cool? I mean learn, laugh, live right? I think that if i can get by with my friends and not be Mr. popular then i can live with that. In the end i want to be the person who i want to be and not have to change or keep up my appearance to stay that way. If i have people around me who accept me for who i am then i don't give a damn what anyone else really thinks. I think that being "cool" is for the people who don't know who they are and want other people to tell them. I do care what other people think of me. But i don't live my life by their opinion. I want to make myself and my real friends happy. Whenever i think, i want to be popular, i just think, would i like to have 10 untrustworthy and not dependable friends or 3 trustworthy and dependable friends that i can call anytime i have a problem or just want to talk to someone. As of right now that is what i think. I really want to see where this unit goes though. I feel like you have a lot up your sleeve. So yeah i don't really know how to leave this off on a meaningful note so i just want to ask. Do you care about being "cool?"

Thursday, November 12, 2009

My Art Project


My art wasn’t made to change anyone’s beliefs or make them think any different of themselves. I made this art because this is what I believe. I am not saying that it is the right way but I am saying that you need to be careful. Technology and change can be dangerous things because it makes everything faster and smarter and it is possible to progress beyond ourselves. We need to be careful of what we are doing otherwise it may overwhelm us and shake the very roots of our existence. From personal experiences I have learned that dependency can be a dangerous thing and that depending on anything too much can lead do your downfall or demise as it may be. If we don’t look at where we are headed then we might not like where we end up. I made this piece in representation of a hostage situation. Technology is taking our minds hostage and there is no ransom. We have to learn how to get it back ourselves. I loved making this piece because it allowed me to base my art on several forms and the most powerful form of propaganda is fear. I made this to strike fear but in a way that they wont get down on their knees but now be a little more aware. I know I am not Martin Scocase but I believe that this had the grainy and basic feel that I wanted. I took my brother, a flashlight, and a Flip Video camera and we went into an empty apartment and I told him to read the script with authority and a deep voice and that was the result. It wasn’t the first time he read it but it was what I was looking for. This was a script that I wrote myself but took inspiration from scripts that had a similar background from other movies such as Live Free Or Die Hard Featuring Bruce Willis. I hope you see this video as I saw it and possibly understand the message I am trying to convey.

Sunday, November 8, 2009

Final Essay

My Sanity/Existence/Life in a Nutshell

By Sam Jossen

Introduction:

I, Sam Jossen, as a human inhabitant of Planet Earth, do not like or enjoy change, it messes up the peace and order in civilization. If everyone were happy where he or she was then there would be no need for competition or war or hate. But that can’t happen. Humans as a whole strive to be better. We want to accomplish more and be better then everyone else, and if everyone is doing this then everyone is going to push everyone else to be better. We often push each other too far and that is what starts wars and mass killings of another type of human. What separates humans from technology is our ability to show emotions. That is our humanity. Humanity as described by the Merriam-Webster dictionary is “the quality or state of being humane.” The state of being human is one thing but the quality is another. What is a good quality of humanity and what can affect it? What would make the quality better or worse? I think the answer is pretty simple. It all boils down to communication. That is the reason why we are on the top of the food chain. We can communicate with each other. Humans as a whole do not like to be disconnected from everyone and because of that they like to have people who they can talk to or even just be in the presence of. They need to be loved and feel compassion. That is what separates us. Now this doesn’t apply to all people. Some people turn to a god for assistance and others turn to another human. It depends on your beliefs but in the end it is the idea of someone else being there that gets you through the day. What the internet is doing to us is pulling each other away from one another, but giving us the idea that we are still together by putting a middle man in there. This middleman comes in the place of a cell phone or a computer with AIM or facebook on it. Technology is slowly taking us away from people and replacing those people with the very computer that sits on my lap right now. This computer gives me access to an infinite amount of knowledge and all I have to do is type in the right words and I can have it. But now is this trade worth it? Is the knowledge really worth the loneliness? I think that it isn’t that is why I believe that the digital age has caused us expose our inner souls and show that we are exchanging our humanity for technology.

Argument 1:

We are becoming less social and more digital. With the ever-friendly Internet at our fingertips people are beginning to loose what is really human in them. Going outside is becoming a chore and meeting new people is becoming scarier then ever. Staring at a screen for hours at a time. While writing this much of the paper I have had little to no interaction with other human beings. I have either stopped for a second to go browse the Internet but other then that I have been sitting in the same spot doing nothing but staring at this mind-numbing screen. I can’t even focus, not because this paper isn’t of interest to me. But because this is getting increasingly lonely and that is a feeling that I don’t personally enjoy. In Feed By M.T. Anderson, you are introduced to characters who are thoroughly unhappy but they don’t know that because they have everything they could ever want.

“I ordered a pair of draft pants from Multitude. It was a real Bargain. I ordered another pair, I ordered pair after pair. I ordered them all in the same color. They were slate. I was ordering them as quickly as I could. I put in my address again and again. I was shivering with the cold on my butt. My arms were around my legs. I ordered pants after pants. I put tracking orders on them. I tracked each one. I could feel them moving through the system… I stayed up all through the early morning, shivering, ordering, ordering, and was awake at dawn, when I put on clothes, and went up to the surface, and watched the shit-stupid sun rise over the shit-stupid world.” (Pg 294).

The reason that he is unhappy is because having everything you want just given to you isn’t very pleasing. He is realizing that there was more out there then the Feed and bargains. They were living in a protected bubble and when that bubble popped then the spell is broken and everything becomes very scary all of a sudden. He overloaded. He didn’t know what was real anymore and he just did all he knew how to do, which was buy and consume. He did what he was bred to do. He never knew anything else because he was given the feed at a very early age. It is similar to putting advertising for Pepsi in a preschool. I don’t think that parents would stand for that, yet in Feed if you don’t have one you are an outcast, so in a messed up sense, the parents want their kids to be advertised to by all the major corporations. They are sacrificing what was once right for the ability to know everything. Is this really a stretch from what we are doing? My cousin has a cell phone and he is only 8 years old. He has his own computer and email address. These kinds of things are just the roots for how any big corporation can get in and take hold.

Argument 2:

Another excellent example of antisocial behavior also comes from Feed. Everyone has AIM in their head so when he doesn’t want to talk to someone he can just ignore them and delete their messages so its like they were never even sent. “She tried chatting me a few times since she sent me the list, but I had on my busy signal.”(Pg 237). This quote is short and sweet; it really shows how having AIM in your head is better then talking. You can avoid people but not be offensive about it. You can pretend like you aren’t getting messages when you really are. It gives you the option to talk to people or not too. This is exactly how becoming antisocial starts. If choose to avoid people then it becomes a trend. It doesn’t happen automatically. But when you are given the option, you will slowly begin to phase out people you don’t like and therefore miss out on many possible social experiences. So infinite knowledge, yes, being able to hold an interesting conversation, no.

Argument 3:

We are using the computer to become smarter but we are loosing our ability to talk to another person. When I think of a way that the Internet could be displayed in a life like manner. I think of a robot. Something without emotions that only feed you answers. In Brave New World by Aldous Huxley, all the characters are very robotic in their movements and about what they think and feel because they are all, quite literally, conditioned to do certain things and believe them unconditionally. They don’t really have a train of thought, and when presented with a new idea they get scared.

“Bernard felt extremely uncomfortable. A man so conventional, so scrupulously correct at the Director—and to commit so gross a solecism! It made him want to hide his face, to run out of the room. Not that he himself saw anything intrinsically objectionable in people talking about the remote past; that was one of those hypnopaedic prejudices he had (so he imagined) completely got rid. What made him feel shy was the knowledge that the director disapproved—disapproved and yet had been betrayed into doing the forbidden thing. Under what inward compulsion? Through his discomfort Bernard eagerly listened. (Pg 96)

He didn’t know what to do. The director is the man in charge. He is the equivalent of President Obama, and when a person of such power says things that are so strange and new, we can’t help but be confused and a little bit scared. The only problem was, what he said in the sentences before the quote wasn’t something that was new information. It was information that was kept from the people because it would give them independent ideas and things like that are what make people start thinking revolutionary thoughts. When he was presented with this new idea he couldn’t think of anything to say really. He was conditioned to believe different ideas. That is the idea of technology, to introduce new ideas but integrate them. The only problem is when they are too integrated into our society. Then they become a problem. When people start depending on technology to live then there is a problem. When people don’t have their own thought process because of technology, then there is a problem.

Argument 4:

For all of its negatives, the Internet has given us one amazing gift, the gift of knowledge. Because of the Internet we have access to Millions of online databases that can tell us whatever we want to know, whenever we want to know it. On the Internet you can get other peoples opinions on matters that concern you, and if you weed through all the junk you might find something that might actually help you. That is one of the main problems with the information on the Internet; there is a lot of junk or nonsense. There are things that people put there just to mess with you or so you get the wrong answer. Many people think that everyone on the Internet is there to help you and if you ask a question, then they will answer is correctly and politely. But this very often isn’t the case. User run sites like Wikipedia.com can be hazardous to use as information in a paper. “If there’s going to be a free encyclopedia, I’d like there to be a better free encyclopedia. It has bothered me that I helped to get a project started, Wikipedia, that people are misusing in this way”(Larry Sanger, Co-Founder Wikipedia). Trust isn’t about what you do; it is about how you do it. An action can mean anything; it’s all about how it is presented. My words right now can mean anything but that is getting off topic. What this all means is that we are loosing ourselves in our trust to the Internet and by trading real life friends for the Internet then we start to base everything we believe in on the Internet. By trading one lie for a different one, we are basically trading one source of knowledge for another. We are trading our friends and humanity for these brightly colored screens in front of us.

Counter argument/Connections/Significance:

With people come conflict and with conflict comes hate, unhappiness and war. If we cut ourselves from each other then we can cut out any bad feelings. We wouldn’t be self-conscious or buy not comfortable, expensive clothing. Life could be about leading a fulfilling and happy life without ever having to hold a conversation with another human in person, because lets be honest, talking to someone in person, you don’t have the same time to think and make your ideas better so you sound smarter or better “spoken.” Its things like that, which could make us all, seem better. There is a show called the Twilight Zone, there is one specific episode, which represents this point. It is called Time Enough At Last. This Episode is about a man named Henry Bemis who absolutely loves to read, but everyone else think it is just horrendous that he does. His boss threatens to fire him for taking his lunch down into the vault to read, and his wife hides the books and magazines so he can’t read them. She wants him to be more social. One day he is reading in the vault and he sees the headlines about the new H-Bomb, then there is an explosion and when he comes up, everything is gone. He doesn’t know what to do, there is food but he begins to get lonely. Then he finds the library, and as he is bending down to get a book his glasses fall off and shatter, his thick glasses that he can’t see without. He didn’t need people he needed books and without those glasses he couldn’t read. What this has to do with the counter argument is that not everyone needs people, they can be happy with books or the Internet. They don’t need to have interaction with other humans as long as they have some other distraction. In our day and age this new distraction is called the Internet. They just need the time.

Conclusion:

Technology can make crazy people sane and sane people crazy. The idea of it is not to “inform the public,” but to advertise to us. Well that is what I believe. The Internet was invented as a defense system for the United States after Russia launched the satellite Sputnik (www.walthowe.com). It quickly became mainstream and quickly following, became a major source of advertisements. You could advertise to specific groups and have more successful ads. The point behind this is that something that starts out for a bad reason (war) could only end badly. We have had scares before with Y2K which was when all the major world powers were afraid that the computers would stop working because dates were saved as the last two digits so it would go from, 99 to, 00. Which many feared would reset the computers and set the banks back to zero. Although it was avoided, it still caused mass panic because people need technology. Everything is digital and if it were to fail us then we would be set back to the Stone Age. Now we are almost fully dependant on technology and because of that we wouldn’t know what to do if we had it taken away. For the most part, people need to be connected to each other. That is what the Internet is, the real time data from all the computers in the world being linked up. If they were all separate then it wouldn’t work as a system. That is what still confuses us as humans. We are willing to put our faith in technology instead of humans because technology doesn’t judge us. It provides answers. It doesn’t show compassion, it just answers and to most people that is what they want. So what are humans truly exchanging their humanity for technology? The answer comes simply in asking yourself; would you still be as close to your friends if you didn’t have a phone or a computer?

Sources:

  • Feed By M.T. Anderson
  • Wordpress.com (Lary Sanger)
  • Brave New World By Aldous Huxley
  • A Brief History of the Internet-Walt Howe (www.walthowe.com)
  • The Twilight Zone-Time Enough At Last By Rod Serling

My Grades

my grades are
POV: 4
Evidence: 3
Effective Organization: 3
Connections and Significance: 4
Opposing POV: 3
Communication Written: 3
Communication Performance: 3
Total 23

Essay Comments

Evan,
i think that you do have a good strong point to your essay here, i mean it is sound in its arguments. i just strongly disagree with your main argument being your main argument. I think that it is just a basic question. i know you are smart but i think that it really has no orgionality. I think that you could have done so much more. I mean look at your counter-argument. It has an origional idea and it is presented well. I am not saying to redo your paper but expand on that idea. If you just work with that idea you really have something. I never thought about smoke signals or telegrams like that. They are the same basic idea but yet we are getting up tight about the internet. There is so much potential yet you dont utilize it. I think that this paper has all it needs but i just dont see any origionlity too it. I mean thats what i was looking for its up to you though. what you have is strong but i think that it could be creative. Its up to you though...to continue my comment
i think this paper is great but there is no heart behind it
my grades are
POV: 2.5
Evidence: 3
Effective Organization: 3
Connections and Significance: 4
Opposing POV: 4
Communication Written: 3
Communication Performance: 3
Total 22.5

Devin, since neither of my partners have an essay and you didn't have any comments i decided to look at yours and i have to say i really was impressed. You really did a great job opening your essay and really caught my attention and i think your evidence really connects to what the average teenager does. You connected it to some issues that really affect us on a day to day basis and can become impending threats. I think you base your thesis a little too much on FEED, and that could have been a problem but i think you work it out amazingly.

my grades are
POV: 4
Evidence: 3
Effective Organization: 3
Connections and Significance: 4
Opposing POV: 4
Communication Written: 3
Communication Performance: 3
Total 24

Tuesday, November 3, 2009

Digitalization Paper

Digitalization Paper

By Sam Jossen

Humanity as described by the Merriam-Webster dictionary is “the quality or state of being humane.” The state of being human is one thing but the quality is another. What is a good quality of humanity and what can affect it? What would make the quality better or worse? I think the answer is pretty simple. It all boils down to communication. That is the reason why we are on the top of the food chain. We can communicate with each other. Humans as a whole do not like to be disconnected from everyone and because of that they like to have people who they can talk to or even just be in the presence of. They need to be loved and feel compassion. That is what separates us. Now this doesn’t apply to all people. Some people turn to a god for assistance and others turn to another human. It depends on your beliefs but in the end it is the idea of someone else being there that gets you through the day. What the internet is doing to us is pulling each other away from one another, but giving us the idea that we are still together by putting a middle man in there. This middleman comes in the place of a cell phone or a computer with AIM or facebook on it. Technology is slowly taking us away from people and replacing those people with the very computer that sits on my lap right now. This computer gives me access to an infinite amount of knowledge and all I have to do is type in the right words and I can have it. But now is this trade worth it? Is the knowledge really worth the loneliness? I think that it isn’t that is why I believe that the digital age has caused us expose our inner souls and show that we are exchanging our humanity for technology.

We are becoming less social and more digital. With the ever-friendly Internet at our fingertips people are beginning to loose what is really human to them. Going outside is becoming a chore and meeting new people is becoming scarier then ever. Staring at a screen for hours at a time. While writing this much of the paper I have had little to no interaction with other human beings. I have either stopped for a second to go browse the Internet but other then that I have been sitting in the same spot doing nothing but staring at this mind-numbing screen. I can’t even focus, not because this paper isn’t of interest to me. But because this is getting increasingly lonely and that is a feeling that I don’t personally enjoy. In Feed By M.T. Anderson, you are introduced to characters who are thoroughly unhappy but they don’t know that because they have everything they could ever want.

“I ordered a pair of draft pants from Multitude. It was a real Bargain. I ordered another pair, I ordered pair after pair. I ordered them all in the same color. They were slate. I was ordering them as quickly as I could. I put in my address again and again. I was shivering with the cold on my butt. My arms were around my legs. I ordered pants after pants. I put tracking orders on them. I tracked each one. I could feel them moving through the system… I stayed up all through the early morning, shivering, ordering, ordering, and was awake at dawn, when I put on clothes, and went up to the surface, and watched the shit-stupid sun rise over the shit-stupid world.” (Pg 294).

The reason that he is unhappy is because having everything you want just given to you isn’t very pleasing. He is realizing that there was more out there then the Feed and bargains. They were living in a protected bubble and when that bubble popped then the spell is broken and everything becomes very scary all of a sudden. He overloaded. He didn’t know what was real anymore and he just did all he knew how to do, which was buy and consume. He did what he was breed to do. He never knew anything else because he was given the feed at a very early age. It is similar to putting advertising for Pepsi in a preschool. I don’t think that parents would stand for that, yet in Feed if you don’t have one you are an outcast, so in a messed up sense, the parents want their kids to be advertised to by all the major corporations. They are sacrificing what was once right for the ability to know everything. Is this really a stretch from what we are doing? My cousin has a cell phone and he is only 8 years old. He has his own computer and email address. These kinds of things are just the roots for how any big corporation can get in and take hold.

Another excellent example of antisocial behavior also comes from Feed. Everyone has AIM in their head so when he doesn’t want to talk to someone he can just ignore them and delete their messages so its like they were never even sent. “She tried chatting me a few times since she sent me the list, but I had on my busy signal.”(Pg 237). This quote is short and sweet; it really shows how having AIM in your head is better then talking. You can avoid people but not be offensive about it. You can pretend like you aren’t getting messages when you really are. It gives you the option to talk to people or not too. This is exactly how becoming antisocial starts. If choose to avoid people then it becomes a trend. It doesn’t happen automatically. But when you are given the option, you will slowly begin to phase out people you don’t like and therefore miss out on many possible social experiences. So infinite knowledge, yes, being able to hold an interesting conversation, no.

For all of its negatives, the Internet has given us one amazing gift, the gift of knowledge. Because of the Internet we have access to Millions of online databases that can tell us whatever we want to know, whenever we want to know it. On the Internet you can get other peoples opinions on matters that concern you, and if you weed through all the junk you might find something that might actually help you. That is one of the main problems with the information on the Internet; there is a lot of junk or nonsense. There are things that people put there just to mess with you or so you get the wrong answer. Many people think that everyone on the Internet is there to help you and if you ask a question, then they will answer is correctly and politely. But this very often isn’t the case. User run sites like Wikipedia.com can be hazardous to use as information in a paper. “If there’s going to be a free encyclopedia, I’d like there to be a better free encyclopedia. It has bothered me that I helped to get a project started, Wikipedia, that people are misusing in this way”(Larry Sanger, Co-Founder Wikipedia). Trust isn’t about what you do; it is about how you do it. An action can mean anything; it’s all about how it is presented. My words right now can mean anything but that is getting off topic. What this all means is that we are loosing ourselves in our trust to the Internet and because of that we don’t really know who we are. We don’t know what is true anymore because we can’t go out and get it. We always have to believe what some one else says. It doesn’t matter what they say, it’s all about credibility.

We are using the computer to become smarter but we are loosing our ability to talk to another person. When I think of a way that the Internet could be displayed in a life like manner. I think of a robot. Something without emotions that only feed you answers. In Brave New World by Aldous Huxley, all the characters are very robotic in their movements and about what they think and feel because they are all, quite literally, conditioned to do certain things and believe them unconditionally. They don’t really have a train of thought, and when presented with a new idea they get scared.

“Bernard felt extremely uncomfortable. A man so conventional, so scrupulously correct at the Director—and to commit so gross a solecism! It made him want to hide his face, to run out of the room. Not that he himself saw anything intrinsically objectionable in people talking about the remote past; that was one of those hypnopaedic prejudices he had (so he imagined) completely got rid. What made him feel shy was the knowledge that the director disapproved—disapproved and yet had been betrayed into doing the forbidden thing. Under what inward compulsion? Through his discomfort Bernard eagerly listened. (Pg 96)

He didn’t know what to do. The director is the man in charge. He is the equivalent of President Obama, and when a person of such power says things that are so strange and new, we can’t help but be confused and a little bit scared. The only problem was, what he said in the sentences before the quote wasn’t something that was new information. It was information that was kept from the people because it would give them independent ideas and things like that are what make people start thinking revolutionary thoughts. When he was presented with this new idea he couldn’t think of anything to say really. He was conditioned to believe different ideas. That is the idea of technology, to introduce new ideas but integrate them. The only problem is when they are too integrated into our society. Then they become a problem. When people start depending on technology to live then there is a problem. When people don’t have their own thought process because of technology, then there is a problem.

Technology can make crazy people sane and sane people crazy. The idea of it is not to “inform the public,” but to advertise to us. Well that is what I believe. The Internet was invented as a defense system for the United States after Russia launched the satellite Sputnik (www.walthowe.com). It quickly became mainstream and quickly following, became a major source of advertisements. You could advertise to specific groups and have more successful ads. The point behind this is that something that starts out for a bad reason (war) could only end badly. We have had scares before with Y2K which was when all the major world powers were afraid that the computers would stop working because dates were saved as the last two digits so it would go from, 99 to, 00. Which many feared would reset the computers and set the banks back to zero. Although it was avoided, it still caused mass panic because people need technology. Everything is digital and if it were to fail us then we would be set back to the Stone Age. Now we are almost fully dependant on technology and because of that we wouldn’t know what to do if we had it taken away. For the most part, people need to be connected to each other. That is what the Internet is, the real time data from all the computers in the world being linked up. If they were all separate then it wouldn’t work as a system. That is what still confuses us as humans. We are willing to put our faith in technology instead of humans because technology doesn’t judge us. It provides answers. It doesn’t show compassion, it just answers and to most people that is what they want. So what are humans truly exchanging their humanity for technology? The answer comes simply in asking yourself; would you still be as close to your friends if you didn’t have a phone or a computer?

Sources:

  • Feed By M.T. Anderson
  • Wordpress.com (Lary Sanger)
  • Brave New World By Aldous Huxley
  • A Brief History of the Internet-Walt Howe (www.walthowe.com)

Monday, November 2, 2009

Hw 17-Blog comments

Will:
I really like the point you are trying to prove here because people really are becoming more social people and you can't just try to avoid it. Because you need to fit in and be apart of social networking. But by doing that you loose who you are as a person. You loose all self identity in the idea to be what everyone wants you to be. What i disagree with is that privacy is something people knowingly and willingly give up. You should focus on why people would do something like that and how that type of thing is encouraged and why. What type of privacy is necessary and what type is still accesable if any is still avaible to the public without a cost. So what is the cost will?

Quinn:
I thought your thesis has great potential but is way to broad, technology itself is such a broad topic, i think you should focus much more on one topic and then argue that, like what will did with facebook and privacy and how we are loosing our privacy. Or maybe how video games affect us in a certain way and what that represents to you. What does technology represent to you? Something is important. But you really need to focus on something, you have some info is here and you really need to focus that in on something specific

Sunday, November 1, 2009

HW 16 -Big Paper Outline 1

My Thesis:
The digital age has caused us expose our inner souls and show that we are exchanging our humanity for knowledge.

Argument 1: We are becoming less social and more digital, we are loosing our grasp on reality (use FEED)
Argument 2: We are learning more and becoming more in-touch with world events (infinite source of knowledge at our fingertips)
Argument 3: We are using the computer to become smarter but we are loosing our ability to talk to another person, we are becoming one with the internet.

Evidence 1: Feed
  • Knowing everything but everyone is the same and does what they are told, are all under control of the feed
Evidence 2: Brave New World
  • Conditioning and how they only believe what they are told to believe and change is scary and can lead people to do stupid things.
Evidence 3: Wall-E
  • People are absorbed by the technology around them and because of that they aren't really humans anymore, just robots with feelings
Evidence 4: Various Class Notes
  • Peoples quotes, examples of overdoses of internet and how it is becoming overwhelming and has the power to make us do what we want
Additional notes/questions:
  • What is the difference between humans and robots?
  • Is it possible to resist the "Feed?"
  • Is change a good thing or a bad thing?
  • Why is this topic so heavily debated?